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Monthly Archives: April 2010

Comics are easier to get into than ever. Part 4 (the final part) of my Black Terror Kid comic.

April 29, 2010 in BLOGS, COMIC BOOKS, MY WEB COMIC, THE SIMPSONS NEWS

THE SIMPSONS NEWS

The count down has begun the pressure is on to finish our show on time.  It’s the first story reel of the season so we need to start this season off with a bang.  Sheesh!

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I’ve heard a lot of complaints, online and off, about comics and how difficult they are to get into.  I don’t see that at all.  I’ve found the opposite is true. Before I begin to explain myself, I will first point you to two online sources that put fourth good arguments against my position. The one that started me thinking about this to begin with is this one:

  •  Today’s Mainstream Comic Books: New Reader Friendly?  By Krishna Sadasivam of PC WEENIES fame.

And the second one (which Krishna linked to as well) is:

  • The four dollar barrier  from the HIGHWAY 62 Blog.

You should first read these two articles. I think their arguments are very sound, but limited in what they put forth as the way to get into comics.  I left a comment on Krishna‘s post but I don’t think I truly answered Krishna‘s concern.  I mostly commented on everyone else’s comments to Krishna‘s argument.  I recommend you read the comments as well.

Okay, now that you’ve read those articles, I’ll put forth my thoughts on the topic. Before I begin though, I will first tell you what I’m not going to be writing about. I’m not going to argue whether or not the modern superhero genre is catering to a younger audience nor will I write about whether cartoony  comic artwork is better than more photo realistic comic art.

I will use the superhero genre of comics for most of my examples, mainly because they are by far the most complex type of comic to get into and it’s the genre that more quickly comes to mind when we think of modern comics.

What I mean by “mainstream” comics in this article is this: Marvel and DC comics, and to a far lesser extent Dark Horse, Image and Top Cow. I also include, in my definition, all English translated Manga. This might be surprising but most younger readers are more familiar with Manga than with Marvel and DC books. I will also use the word “floppy” to describe what most of us know as a regular flimsy comic, as apposed to a much sturdier trade paperback comic (a.k.a. “graphic novel”).

Okay, so, the topic that concerns us here is how easy is it to get into reading comics. I propose to you, that it’s easier than it’s ever been to get into comics. Comics and information about comics are everywhere. The internet has a ton of free legal comics at your fingertips.  Cartoons and movies are great introductory ways to get you intrigued and curious about reading comics.  Newstands may be dying off but comics are thriving as trade paperback books in all major books chains. Libraries carry comics now and there are even Encyclopedias that explain some superhero comic book universes. There really is, no real reason, why someone who wants to get into comics can’t get into them. If you think it’s too much work, trust me, it’s worth the effort.

As I was growing up in El Salvador (I lived there till I was 6 years old) my grandmother had a bookshelf of comics in her house for us and we used to look through them and read them.  Surprisingly enough, this is not what got me into comics. What got me into comics was, years later, when our family had moved to California. Sometime when I was around 11 or 12, I picked up a copy of Peter Porker, The Spectacular Spider-Ham #15 at the local Circle K convenience store. It cost 75 cents. The same book now would probably cost $4.00 and I would have probably gotten it at Barnes and Nobles or Borders.

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I wasn’t interested in “serious” comics at the time.  I just wanted the funny cartoony stuff. Eventually, the book was canceled (I guess I was the only person that bought it) and the Spider-Ham stories where relegated to the back of Marvel Tales featuring Spider-Man.  I bought those for the Spider-Ham stories but eventually, got bored one day and read the “serious” Spider-Man story which I fell in love with.  This lead to my love of the “serious” comics.

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I learned real quick that I had no idea what the heck was going on in any of the “serious” comics.  In fact the only reason I knew who anyone was in a Spider-Man comic was because the Spider-Ham comic had spoofed them.  I read the comics anyway.  I thought I’d eventually understand what was going on. This worked some what.  In those days the only way to find out what had gone before in a superhero book was really limited. You either bought back issues or read the “old issue index” comics that gave you a synopsis of the years of comics that had come before.  If you were lucky you collected the comics that had does indexes.

Official Marvel Index to the Amazing Spider-Man

Okay so what’s my point? Why the personal history?  Well, on the one hand I see the point that a floppy comic now a days being $4.00 is a barrier to entry.  I may not have bought my first comic if it was $4.00. But lets say I got a comic somehow.  If it was a cartoony superhero comic like, Billy Batson and the Power of Shazam, it would have a good long story for a good value and it would have appealed to me where I was at, taste wise.  I would have come back for more.  Okay, lets say I wanted to get into a “serious” superhero comic, lets say, Spider-Man. Somehow I got hold of one and read it. Exactly the same thing that happened to me the first time would happen, I would read it, be intrigued and not know who anyone was, but I’d probably come back for more to find out.

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You would probably argue,

“See you’re assuming you would read a floppy and get into a comic but comics are $4.00 so how would you even get the chance to read them at all?” Well, I’d read them for free at the Marvel website or download it for free from DC KidsWB. The Marvel website even has books that help you catch up with what’s currently going on.

There are more ways now than any other time, to get into comics and find out who the mainstream characters are. For starters, there are animated cartoons that do a phenomenal job of introducing people to the mainstream characters. I know because, it was through these cartoons that I got introduced to the characters of the DC Universe. Now, I love to read those comics. I’ve also gotten exposed to a lot of great Manga from watching their movies and anime, like the Lone Wolf and Cub manga and the Akira manga to name a few.  My wife learned and became familiar with the X-Men and the JLA from watching their cartoons so when she reads those books, she knows who everyone is. The same goes with my Sister-in-law. She loves reading DC comics because she watched the Cartoon Network Justice League cartoon. My kids know who the Justice League, The Teen Titans, Spider-Man,  Iron Man,  The Legion of Superheroes, and Astroboy are from watching my DVDs of those cartoons. During her nap time, my daughter flips through kids comics of some of those characters before she goes to sleep (they’re all totally trashed, and very well “read”. She’s only three). My kids even ask me to read them comics.

My brother and sister-in-law bought the Marvel Encyclopedia and the DC Encyclopedia in order to get caught up on who’s who in both Universes. If you don’t have the money to spend for one of those, go to a website like Comic Vine. They have up to the minute explanation on what’s going on. Something I wish I had been able to do when I first started collecting superhero comics. The superhero comics I read as a kid in the 80s needed that as much as the current superhero comics do.

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If you don’t want to deal with the big history of most superhero comics. Most Manga doesn’t have that problem (some do though) and there is also DC’s Vertigo line. Many of those don’t have as much history to catch up on, if any.

Not only that, but you can’t really argue that current superhero genre comics are too complicated,  too adult or too , whatever you’re prejudice, and that older comics are better. Mainly because those very superhero comics are now collected in omnibus editions. Some of these collections can be found used for as low as $4.00! So if you want to read “better” superhero comics, then nothing is stopping you from reading those and literally starting from the beginning. If you want to make sure that the comics you let your kids read are “kid friendly” why not buy them or encourage them to buy and read those collections.  They still hold up and there’s plenty of them; and when it comes to manga, there are plenty of kid friendly comics there too. Astroboy anyone?

If you want a complete comic story (old or new, adult friendly or kid friendly), you can pick up a trade paperback. There are many of these which are good introductions to a hero or universe. You can find all these and more at you’re local book store (here in the U.S.) or even *GASP!* at the library. Something unheard of in the 80s when I started reading comics.  I would have LOVED to have that opportunity.  I went to the library all the time as a kid.

Okay, having said all that, I want to argue that the price of floppies is too much for the value you get. $4.00 seems too much.  Yet, a Magic the Gathering Booster pack, (same target audience) is about $4.00 for fifteen cards. A Yu-Gi-Oh! booster pack is $5.00 for nine cards. A Playstation 2 game averages $35.00 (double the price of most trade paperbacks). Xbox 360 and Playstation 3 games are about $60.00. The target audience of today’s comics are pretty used to forking over a lot for a little.  I don’t like it at all but the price seems about average. Whether you get $4.00 worth of entertainment out it, that depends on the comic you buy and how it’s written. This is especially true for floppies since many (but not all) of them can be read in about 15 minutes.

Still, in the end, I don’t think floppies are as important as they used to be. Don’t get me wrong, they still have a valuable role to play, but they aren’t the only way in anymore. In fact, I will go so far as to say, floppies are not the  way to get into most American superhero comics. Floppies are mostly written for comic geeks, trade paperbacks are for everyone else.   Times have changed.

“But wait,” you say. “Encyclopedias? Looking up characters on the net? Watching cartoons and movies? That’s an awful lot of work. I want everything spoon fed to me”. Sorry, I can’t help you. Reading comics is a hobby.  Every hobby has a bit of a learning curve. In knitting you have to first learn to knit. In putting together model kits, you have to first learn the best supplies to use and the best methods of assembling. In wargaming, you learn the rules and then learn tactics and strategies. The same goes for board gaming. If you golf, you learn and practice your technique. If you’d never played a video game before, how steep would  the learning curve be to play a game like Halo 3? Most people that play video games spend hours looking up games and reviews to see what games are coming out that they’ll like to play next, as if researching for a school report. That’s a lot of work.   Most hobbies require some level of work on your part. Work that you enjoy doing because it’s fun, enjoyable work and you find the reward from the hobby worth the effort. Comics are worth the effort.

After looking at everything that is available, I don’t think that mainstream comics are difficult to get into at all.  It’s easier than it was when I started. I only had superhero comics to choose from. There’s more variety out there than there ever was.  If you want to get into them and you’re finding it difficult, you must be working pretty hard to not succeed.

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Happy Birthday baby Ambrose. Black Terror Kid PART 3, Free Microcapitalism book

April 22, 2010 in FAMILY, MY WEB COMIC, THE SIMPSONS NEWS

THE SIMPSONS NEWS

I work with the kindest people.  Tuesday night I received flowers in regards to the birth of my baby boy (more on that below, after the comic). Thank you so much everyone.

It was difficult to concentrate at work this week. That said, I think I got quite a lot done.

BOOKS

I wrote about Paul Nowak’s new book THE MICROCAPILIST MANIFESTO a few weeks back. Well, it turns out that Paul has decided to release the book for FREE.

Yup, so if you’re interested in the book, I recommend to click the link below and get yourself a copy:

THE MICROCAPITALIST MANIFESTO by Paul Eward Nowak free pdf

MY WEB COMIC

For the earlier part of this story, CLICK HERE.

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To be continued…

FAMILY

A ton has happened since my last post.

On April 15th my son Ambrose Mikayel Escobar was born.  He’s named after St. Ambrose and Michael the Archangel.

I woke up at my usual time Thursday and started getting ready for work. Alesha wasn’t in bed so I thought she was just up early and couldn’t sleep. When I went down stairs I found her pacing around the living room. It seems she’d been having contractions for quite some time and she was checking to see if they stopped.  They didn’t. She was going into labor. She and I got the kids ready as soon I we could. My cousin Carolina did us the enormous favor of taking care of the kids at her house while I drove Alesha to the hospital. By 7:45 am Ambrose had been born by way of C-section.  He was in breach position, just like his older brother had been and not only that but his umbilical cord had been rapped around his neck. The anesthesiologist had an iPod with him in the surgery room and had been playing music through out the surgery.  As my son was born, the song Baby Boy played in the background. I didn’t even notice. I was told this later by a medical student that was there to learn and help out.

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I held Ambrose soon after and Alesha got to see him and kiss him. It was a very odd and difficult moment for me. On the one hand, there was the baby in my arms, perfectly healthy and happy.  Not even crying, just like it was with his sister. His eyes were open and he was looking around. On the other hand, there was my wife, here belly wide open, the skin folded over itself over her rib cage looking like a gutted pumpkin. Seeing her like that made me very sad and very worried.

Afterward, Alesha went into the recovery room to sleep. I went to see Ambrose at the nursery and then went out to the waiting room to meet up with my father-in-law who was waiting out there. We went to see the baby and when he was satisfied that everything was okay, he went home. He planned to come back later with my mother-in-law once Alesha was in a room and awake.

I went to have breakfast and sketched a bit but I wasn’t really in the mood to draw. When I returned, Alesha had been moved into a room and I went in to visit and help out. She really didn’t need me there though. She just needed to sleep.  Also, the baby wasn’t going to show up for a few hours. They needed to make sure he was okay.

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I was left with nothing to do.  I couldn’t pick up the kids because they were having a fantastic time some 30 miles away. I was useless to my wife who was sleeping and I didn’t know what to do with myself for the next two hours. Since work was only 20 minutes away,  I thought I’d go there, so I did.

I got quite a mixed reaction from people at work for the fact that I had showed up.  I was only planning to be there for two hours. I discovered that my section was given out to other people so I couldn’t do what I had planned to very easily.  The Director gave me one of my scenes back and I did as much of it as I could before going back to the hospital.  Time flew.

I got back a just a few minutes before Ambrose was wheeled into Alesha’s room for the first time. Just then my parents showed up and saw their new grandson. It was a very happy moment.

My parents left soon after to pick up my other kids and take them home with them.  We were told the kids where having a fantastic time with my cousin. I stayed with Alesha and helped out as much as I could.  My in-laws came by later that evening to see their new grandson and they were very happy to see him. Alesha was very tired that night and had trouble keeping any food down.

I left the hospital around 8:30 pm to pick up the kids from my parent’s house.  When I got there around 9pm, they were still awake (but running on “fumes”). I heard about their adventures and took them home. Those kids went into hibernation mode or something because they didn’t wake up til 10:30am the next day.  VERY unusual for these kids who usually wake up at 8am at the latest.

The kids woke up overwhelmingly happy. We ate breakfast and soon got ready to go to the hospital to see Mommy and Baby Ambrose.

The reaction to the baby was much better than I had anticipated.  I thought Munchkin was going to be a bit freaked out by the baby, but she wasn’t. I think she had been mulling the idea of a baby brother over in her head on the way to the hospital.  At one point, as we walked through the hospital parking lot to see Mommy for the first time, she said,

“Daddy, I like my new baby brother.” She hadn’t even met him yet. I took that to mean that she liked the idea of having a new baby brother. Elizabeth was very good with him once she got to meet him. One of the first things she did was give him a little kiss on his head.

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Dante, on the other hand, wasn’t positive nor negative about the whole thing.  He saw the baby and just sorta ignored him after that.  Well, at least he wasn’t angry or afraid or something.

I was supposed to meet my parents there after my mom got off work. I was counting on them showing up around 2pm or so but it didn’t turn out that way.  Mom had to go shopping since they had just recently come back from a trip and had no food in the house.  I was stuck with the kids in the hospital for about four hours and attempted to keep them entertained as best as I could.

When my parents finally showed up, we ate, visited Alesha and Ambrose, and then the kids were off to have fun with my parents. I stayed and helped out Alesha till 9pm before I went and picked up the kids.

The next day (Saturday) we had planned to have my in-laws take care of the kids while I, once again, helped Alesha out as best as I could.  Turns out that Alesha’s friend Rosetta showed up and beat me to it. She stayed with Alesha all day and all night so I actually stayed with the kids that day.  In the afternoon, Munchkin and I played TRAVEL BLOKUS. She picked up the rules real well and we had fun. In the evening, I tried to get Dante and Munchkin to play it together, but the rules went out the window pretty quick after the attempt. They had fun anyway. We then played with my INGENIOUS board game for a while. It was a good fun evening.

Sunday after Mass and lunch, the kids and I went to my parent’s house and I dropped them off.  They were going to go to the park down by their house that has a lake. My brother and Deborah (his wife) were going to be there with little Paolo (my nephew, their son) and I think they were mostly there to celebrate Deborah’s birthday, which was Monday.  I went to the hospital and spent the day with Alesha and Ambrose.

Alesha had been doing a lot of bonding with Ambrose the last few days. By this point, she was basically taking care of him all by herself. She had been able to get out of bed the day after the C-section. I was very impressed with how fast she was recovering.  She was changing him and feeding him mostly without help for the last three days.

I headed home around 8pm that night, picked up the kids, who had a great time at the park, and went home because I started work again on Monday.

The next day I woke up, got the kids ready for daycare, dropped them off, went to work and waited to be told when I was going to need to pick up Alesha and Ambrose so they could come home. After a bit of confusion, Alesha told me 5:30pm. One of the problems she was having was that her doctor got called out of town for some family emergency.  Alesha was waiting for another doctor to see her so she could be dismissed.

I picked up the kids and got to the hospital around 5pm. I took them to get something to eat while we waited. After finishing out food and getting kicked out of the cafeteria, because the kids were too loud, I went back to the room to wait with Alesha. Two and a half excruciating hours later, the doctor finally came by and dismissed her. Everyone but Ambrose was worn out by that point.

Alesha was overwhelmed with exhaustion and emotion all the way home. I was wishing we could be home faster.  Once home though, Alesha calmed down and began to relax.  I put the kids to bed and they past out pretty quick.  Little Ambrose was but in his bassinet and fell asleep in that squished frog pose newborns get into when you lay them down.

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I told Alesha about how I fixed the squeak on our bedroom door only to have it close itself  all the time now and she cracked a smile and laughed. She felt and looked better.

So after all that, the baby was home. Alesha was home.  Everything was almost finished.  There were a few things still to take care of but, I least they were finally home.

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Black Terror Kid PART 2. The new Simpsons season has officially begun for us. Fun little video game cartoon.

April 15, 2010 in FAMILY, MY WEB COMIC, THE SIMPSONS NEWS

THE SIMPSONS NEWS

The new season has officially started for me.  I’m now working on season one of the new season.  I was helping out on a show doing layout last week and earlier this week.  I actually find that it helps to switch between the two jobs.  In one job I get to draw a bit tighter and have a bit more control over the scenes I’m working on.  In the other job I find the drawings are more loose and less on model but there is a very satisfying feeling of creating the initial look the show will take on later.

In more exciting work related news, I was called in to the producer’s office Tuesday night and was asked if I would be interested in taking over the revisionist spot that had just recently been vacated.  It seems a few people had brought my name up for the job.  I was very glad to have been asked and so I accepted.

Next month they’re going to try me out for the spot.  If things don’t work out, I’ll go back to doing story reel work.  Otherwise, I’d have a new official position on the show.  I’m very excited.  It’s really tough to get a board position on this show.  There are some really good board artists here that do an incredible job.

MY WEB COMIC

For the earlier parts of the story CLICK HERE.

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To be continued next week…. 

VIDEO

This is AWESOME! I love this little video about a “gold digger” princess:

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The Black Terror Kid comic PART 1. Happy Easter. Sketching video. Comic app for the iPad video review.

April 8, 2010 in ART, BLOGS, MY WEB COMIC, THE SIMPSONS NEWS, VIDEOS

THE SIMPSONS NEWS

I after finishing up the last of the scenes on the show I was working on, I began helping out on another show. I’ll begin working on the first show of next season sometime next week.

FAMILY

Happy Easter! I’m so glad that Easter finally came.  Lent is always a tough time to live through.

For Easter, we got together with the family at an Easter party at my aunt’s house. The kids had a great time, looking for eggs and eating candy.

I had a good time because there was some very yummy food.

He is risen!

MY WEB COMIC

I’m almost done so I’m posting up the first three pages and will continue to post the rest of it in the next three weeks. I hope you like it:

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To be continued next week…

What have I learned from this so far? Quite a bit actually, but the biggest thing I’ve learned so far is that coloring a comic is really tedious and time consuming. It’s very doubtful that I’ll do another one in color any time soon.  I’ll leave it in black and white.

VIDEOS/ART
These videos by Mike McDonnell on Warm Up Sketching are really helpful. I’m going to try putting the advise into practice when I go into figure drawing for now on. Check them out:

VIDEOS

Reading comics on the iPad? What’s that look like? Here’s a review of the Marvel Comic reader app for the iPad:

Now I just have to figure out how to put my comic up on the iPad.

BLOGS

You will notice that I now have a new page up on my blog called, “My Stories and Comics“. From now on, whenever I complete a comic, story, or drawings with a theme, I’m going to be creating a special page for those things so you can read them all in one sitting instead of having to search through the blog looking for all the parts.

I will be working on it to try to make it look nicer than what I have now.  For now, it’s just functional. Take a look and let me know what you think.

VIDEO 

Yet another funny review. This time it’s a video review of STAR WARS: ATTACK OF THE CLONES

Warning, the video is very funny but has some bad language:

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The Seven Impossible Tasks concluded. Christianity and Sci-fi. Robot Chicken Writers play D&D.

April 1, 2010 in ART, FAMILY, ROLE PLAYING GAMES, THE SIMPSONS NEWS, VIDEOS, WRITING

THE SIMPSONS NEWS

Having fun drawing my scenes so far.  Nothing fancy or crazy to report.  Thing are back to normal at work.

ART

For Part 1, CLICK HERE.

For Part 2, CLICK HERE.

For Part 3, CLICK HERE.

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…and that’s IT.  That’s all I wrote.  There isn’t anymore.  It took, off and on, about three years to do this much.  Mostly because I was trying to redesign the comic and recompose the pages.  As well as trying to adjust this first part of the story so that it really grabbed you.  This only caused me to burn out on it and I ended up abandoning the comic in the end.  Should I have?  I really didn’t want to redraw 22 pages again after all that time.

Biggest problem I had with the comic? I took it waaaaay to seriously.

Below I have included the original ending to comic I had written.  It’s actually a really bad ending, now that I look at it again.  I’m VERY glad I changed it.  The comic that followed that ending was actually going to begin with the three main characters sitting around a table, drinking tea as the Golem explained what was going on.  Very dull with a lot of exposition.  The new ending I ended up going with, in contrast, was going to lead the characters, in the next comic, right to the “meat” of the story and was going to push the character to make some difficult choices right off the bat.  That was going to be far more interesting:

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See what I mean? Really bad ending. It’s also very unclear if Angie is sick and has something wrong with her, which was NOT my intent.

Well, anyway, what do you think?  Did you like it? Didn’t like it?  Are you disappointed  that there isn’t anymore?  Was it not that good to begin with?  Would you have payed money for it had I finished it?

I’m really curious.  If you really liked it please tell me. If you didn’t like it, please tell me that too.  It won’t hurt my feelings or anything.  I’m MUCH more critical about this story than I think you will ever be.  You may just confirm my suspicions by telling me what you didn’t like.  If you DID like it, please tell me why as well.  Especially since there are things I think are really working in the story.  In any case, depending on the reaction, I may or may not continue the story.  I mean, if no one likes it enough for me to continue, it’s not like I was going to anyway, but if suddenly, I get thousands of people wanting more…

For now, I’ve got tons of other ideas to attempt.

Next week, THE BLACK TERROR KID.

FAMILY

My Abuelita is not doing very well lately.  I would appreciate any prayers you can send her way and our families way.  Thanks.

WRITING

Because I’ve been trying to come up with a fun, SHORT, story or skit for my next project, I’ve been rereading my books on story theory lately.  I’ve decided that I was going to try to structure whatever story I ended up telling “properly”, or at the very least, as well as I can.

Part of the reason for this is that I’m having trouble putting the idea I have together into something, ANYTHING, remotely entertaining.  I have and idea and can’t seem to actually execute it so it’s kinda driving me nuts.

The first book I decided to reread was:

  • STORY: SUBSTANCE, STRUCTURE STYLE, AND THE PRINCIPLES OF SCREENWRITING by Robert Mckee.

This book actually helped out a lot.  It’s a very popular book on the Three Act Structure Theory of writing.  It’s good, even if you’re not writing a screenplay.

I’m avoiding the “Heroes Journey” Theory of story right now, mainly because I find it annoying at the moment.  Nothing wrong with it or anything, it just reminds me of Joseph Campbell and I find him annoying right now so I kinda want to avoid the theory for that completely subjective reason.

The other book I re-familiarizing  myself with is:

  • DRAMATICA: A NEW THEORY OF STORY by Melanie Anne Phillips & Chris Huntley.

I’ve never tried this theory out myself but it really makes a lot of sense to me.  It’s a very deep and intense theory that puts forth the proposition that all stories are grand arguments about a specific subject, that must include all sides of a given argument in order to feel complete.  Kinda like St. Thomas Aquina‘s Summa Theologica  only in story form. I think it’s a very clever theory but overwhelmingly cumbersome.  That said, it’s VERY helpful if you’re in the place I’m at right now where you’re not sure which way to go. It gives you enough structure from the get go so you can start building a workable story that will hopefully trigger the inspiration to get you what you want.  It’s also a good theory to use to double check the integrity of a story you’ve written by checking if it’s well balanced.

You can Download the 4th edition of the DRAMATICA book online for free at the Dramatica site, you can read it directly at the site for free, or you can go to iTunes and download the 10th edition of the DRAMATICA book as a podcast. In many ways, listening to the book on audio is like listening to a university course in Socratic Logic (I should know, since that is how I learned Socratic Logic).  I don’t know if I can recommend this theory or not since I have just now begun to truly use it but I’ll keep you updated with what I discover.

BLOGS

I became aware, through a “retweet” Topher Davila sent on Twitter, of this article from the FIRST THINGS website:

SCIENCE FRICTION

 

by Robert R. Chase

It’s an article about Christianity in Science Fiction stories and it’s really great.  It opened my eyes to a LOT of really interesting Science Fiction stories that have very positive Catholic elements that I didn’t really know where out there.  I highly recommend reading the article.

ROLE PLAYING GAMES/VIDEO

In case you ever wondered what a game of DUNGEONS AND DRAGONS looked like as it’s being played,  here’s a fun video of the writers of the animated show ROBOT CHICKEN, playing a game:

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